Over There

Over There

Fallin’ apart at the seams it seems and the iridescent image swims through a mirror that flows into the reflection of my behaviour so much so wanting to get across the road constantly but with this heavy heavy load like a tonne of terracotta tiles on my head structurally weak I’d rather stay home instead I wish I could offload on you anybody I don’t care who but that wouldn’t be fair either when you have your inconvenient load too many days I think about leaving the beauty of living is hard to see and I’m tired of searching for reasons to stay one more day it’s almost as if there’s something deceptive crawling around in my brain eating I don’t want to be but I’m always the same pitiful creature floundering it seems the iridescent image through the mirror flows into my behaviour

Thank you, Dora and the dVerse team.

© 2026 Ociola Samantha Williams. All Rights Reserved.

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5 responses to “Over There”

  1. Catherin J Pascal Dunk Avatar

    I like this! Cool way of writing in one long sentence!

    1. Catherin J Pascal Dunk Avatar

      I’ve pasted a link to your post in the comments of my long sentence challenge here:
      https://wordflowerpoetry.com/2026/07/03/long-sentence-challenge/comment-page-1/#comment-2375

      1. Ociola | Planet PU Avatar

        Thank you! Very much appreciated 😊

    2. Ociola | Planet PU Avatar

      Thank you. It came to me while I was writing the piece, it seemed appropriate.

      1. Catherin J Pascal Dunk Avatar

        Worked a treat!

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