Indeed, you must have a wife at home
We only talk when you're outside - alone
You've never extended an offer to invite me over
The dinners and you coming to mine are fine - but
We only talk when you're outside - alone
Often, you tell me my feelings are baseless
The dinners and you coming to mine are fine - but
Love is silly and also blind. Still, that soft voice nags
Often, you tell me my feelings are baseless
I lie back, letting you convince me without evidence
Love is silly and also blind. Still, that soft voice nags
But - I've been single too long. I'll put up even when it's wrong
I lie back, letting you convince me without evidence
You've never extended an offer to invite me over
But - I've been single too long. I'll put up even when it's wrong
Indeed, you must have a wife at home
Given my dating experiences, I should have written this sooner. 🙂
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Very well written . 🙂
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Thank you very much! 😊
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Samantha, good title. Your poem fell together so well. I could almost see it as song lyrics. These things happen, and probably more often than anyone would like to acknowledge.
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Thank you! Your comment on song writing makes me smile, it’s on my list of things to do! 😍
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You’re very welcome, and I hope you do!
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So well written, and that nagging feeling that something is wrong really works so well with the repetitions in the form.
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Thank you, Björn! 🙂
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A sad situation, poetically conveyed. I feel bad for this person, and I hope she finds someone better. Thank you for writing to the prompt!
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My pleasure! 🙂 Thank you again for supplying the prompt.
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You’re most welcome.
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