SugarKiss Twist - Poems

Approach

I am the weather
Powerful and tender. Yet …
Ready [to] surrender
Heart in hand. Not what I planned
Here I stand - Me! As I am

Approach

Technically, this isn’t a Tanka because the third line has one syllable too many. But I’m bending the rules a bit – explains the square bracket.

Sam

Feature Photo Credit: @jillmw_ru via Twenty20

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