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Dosing

A minimalist visual poem titled “Dosing” is arranged in three right-justified, staggered stanzas on a pale background. The background shows milk pouring from a glass bottle into a cup, reinforcing the themes of consumption and subtle manipulation. The last stanza ends with “Don’t worry ... If you haven’t noticed, it’s already going down smoothly, sugar-free.” The layout visually mimics regression, emphasizing the poem’s commentary on complacency and societal regression. By Ociola | Planet PU

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Ociola | Planet PU

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How much sugar
Do you need
To swallow
What
Prevaricators
Feed

With just a spoonful
Every gulp
Is delightful
What “Medicine”
Are you consuming
Without questioning

Don't worry ...
If you haven’t noticed
It’s already going down
Smoothly
Sugar-free

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